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Try harder.

If this is supposed to be ironically funny, then it isn't. If you're being serious about wanting to get better, then make an attempt at making a coherent solid piece of animation that makes sense.

And spell correctly. If you're happy with this style, then keep it up, 's yo stuff, dude.

Kieran123 responds:

Don't worrie I've just started with some friends a big long project that will take me a while. And if I wanted to spell well I would of gone to a private school and drink tea with the teachers and be a perfectly modelled boy.

Brilliant

Your animations have the most style I've seen on Newgrounds, please keep it up. Altough you keep your animations simple, that is all you need to make it great, and I respect you for that. One of the few animations I've watched repeatedly.

RED RUM..*snicker*

Wow...

Undoubtedly one of the most interesting and original flashes out there. Kudos to Andrew for the song, and great timing on your part, it made the song so much better. I'm not going to criticize about originality of animation or about it being all just one screen, because anything more complicated would've taken the fun out of it. So great job...

Very promising...

I really like this, it has terrific potential, some parts were incredibly funny and some sequences contained great animation.

The ending was very cliche, and maybe think of putting in some sound effects during your fights that contain only a song by the Pillows.

Very very cool overall...

I don't care how truthful this is...

Look, I understand that this has value in that it brings a message, but this is not a debate website, this is NEWGROUNDS, where people send high quality flashes, and get praised on their abilities as artists and animators. I see no animation on this flash whatsoever(aside from the loading bar)I even double checked. Seeing as how flash movies are rated on their art, their graphic quality, and the progression and fluidity of their animation, I'd give you a very low score, and have. If there was a section that let me score you on "quality of message" then I'd probably give you a 9, but this is not the case, so I think it's wrong that such a cheap source of animation should get so much praise.

I fully support messages in your animations, but there is no animation to be found, which should not be accepted...

Amazing...

I have been watching your movies for some time, and I have come to the conclusion that YOU, my friend, are going somewhere. Although this is not the best graphics in the world, the animation and story progression and originality surpass anything I have yet to see. Long story short, keep up the good work.

P.S. kudos on the animating with a mouse an' all...

Not bad

A very promising first flash, keep it up...

Not bad

I loved the music, great job on it, and it had a nice style. Keep it up.

Wow

Kudos for making it in English AND in Spanish, the first I've seen around here.

Wow...

True story, huh? That's amazing, very awesome movie, keep up your unique style of story-telling.

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